Bashō's haiku in Japanese and English by L.P. Lovee


Inspired by the book titled “575 The Haiku of Basho”, I will translate 300 HAIKUs of Bashō under the pen-name of L. P. Lovee.

In the introduction of the book, Mr. John White (Ex-professor of UCL) mentioned as follows:“In all the translations that follow in this particular selection of Basho’s haiku, the 5-7-5 format is strictly adhered to, and whenever Basho does see fit to add or subtract a sound unit or two in a given line, the syllabic structure of the resulting English haiku meticulously follows the same pattern.”

Although I appreciate his efforts, I am afraid that such efforts are not always successful for representing Basho’s haiku. The reason is because all of Japanese words can be expressed with letters "kana" ("ひらかな” or "カタカナ") each of which has a vowel, whereas all of English words consist of letters having a vowel or a consonant. Moreover, among Japanese words, there are many homonyms, differences of which can be expresed with "kanji", that is, "漢字”.

For example, you will find interesting aspects of such differences by reading "Farewell haiku of Ransetsu" (

or "Let's enjoy haiku" (

Thus, in most cases, the Japanese 5-7-5 norm is not equivalent to the English norm of 5-7-5 syllables. If you adhere to the 5-7-5 syllable, the English haiku tends to lack brevity and “kire” (i.e., pause or discontinuation), which are essential factors in Japanese haiku. A haiku having a "kire" allows its reader to have an instant imagination for what will follow the kire, or what is unsaid in the haiku.

There are many English translations made by non-Japanese speakers, some of them are well done, but the language barriers prevent them from representing fascinating aspects of Bashō's haiku. In this site, I will attempt to break such language barriers as a native Japanese speaker.

For the convenience of readers to evaluate, I will describe my translations of Bashō's haiku by putting the reference number of each corresponding haiku of "575 The Haiku of Bashō".

Satoshi Kinoshita


Bashō’s haiku (1)~(10)


(horohoroto yamabukichiruka takinooto)


shall yellow rose petals
flutter down?
the thunder of water fall


(kirishigure fujiominuhizo omoshiroki)


showery mists
hiding Mt. Fuji today_


(yamajikite naniyarayukashi sumiregusa)


coming through a mountain path,
somehow graceful_


(nagakihio saezuritaranu hibarikana)


the so-called long-day
insufficient to fully sing_


(nabatakeni hanamigaonaru suzumekana)


a plot of rape field,
with a look of flower viewing
a sparrow


(iwatsutsuji somuru namidaya hototogisu)


the rock azalea
dyed with the tears of
a cuckoo


(harunareya namonakiyamano asagasumi)


the spring, now_
on the unnamed mountain
morning mists


(mumegakani nottohinoderu yamajikana)


amid the scent of plum blossoms
suddenly emerges the sun_
this mountain path


(samidareni kakurenumonoya setanohashi)


in the rain of rainy season
what remains in sight_
the Seta Bridge


(kazefukeba obosounaruya inuzakura)


when the wind blows,
their tails dwindle_
dog-cherry trees