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Almost unnoticed
An admirable close attention is shown to another form of life in the throes of death. The impersonalized excellence of the first line creates an ambiguity with mystical suggestiveness. No sentimentality here; rather a compassionate attention to another living creature, however small. To so well consummate this verse in the exacting form of traditional haiku evidences the special effort and care that were given to its expression. However, haiku success does not hinge upon form. The lifeful, caring awareness exemplified by this haiku experience is infinitely more important. Une pomme, une seule,
a vernal rain -
Tears blur the meadow --
running with the car--
in the small gap
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