| kisutsuki
ya ochiba wo isogu maki no kigi |
|
woodpecker
leaves quickly fall
in the meadow |
 -
MIZUHARA Shuoshi (1892 - 1981) |

| natsu gusa
ni kikansha no sharin kitetomaru |
summer grasses
the wheels of the locomotive
come to a stop |
 -
YAMAGUCHI Seishi (1901 - 1994) |
| tampopo ya
choko nigoru tokoshinae |
|
dandelions
muddy waters of the Yangze
eternally |
 -
YAMAGUCHI Seison (1892 - 1988) |
| taki no ue ni mizu arawarete
ochini keri |
above the waterfall
water revealed
becomes waterfall |
 -
GOTO Yahan (1895 - 1976) |

| utsukushiki midori hashireri
natsu ryori |
|
beautiful lines
of green run through
the summer dishes |
 -
HOSHINO Tatsuko (1903 - 1984) |

| hane watte tento mushi no
tobi izuru |
|
splitting her wings
the ladybug's
flying begins |
 -
TAKANO Suju (1893 - 1976) |

| ko no ha
furi yamatsu isogu na isugu na yo |
|
leaves falling
never-ending
yet why, so fast |

- KATO Shuson (1905 - 1993) |

| banryoku
no naka ya ako no ha hae somuru |
|
along with spring leaves
my child's teeth
are coming in |
 -
NAKAMURA Kusatao (1901 - 1983) |
| kari gane
ya nokoru mono mina utsukushiki |
|
wild geese
all that remains
beautiful |
 -
ISHIDA Hakyo (1913 - 1969) |

| chiru
sakura umi ao kereba umi e chiru |
|
cherry blossoms fall
on the sea
for the sea is blue |
 -
TAKAYA Soshu (1910 - 1999) |

| Reviews: |
woodpecker
leaves quickly fall
in the meadow |
 -
MIZUHARA Shuoshi (1892 - 1981)
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The scene is Akagi mountain of Gunma prefecture. The woodpecker
is pecking at the tree and eating insects. People listening
to the sound of the pecking, also notice that the leaves were
already falling in the meadow. This is one scene of the highland
meadows of late autumn.
This haiku is rather new in style, because haiku usually describes
in black "sumie" style, but this haiku is written
as if in the oil painting style of the French Impressionists.
So Shuoshi seems to have the eyes of a Western artist towards
Nature, seen in bright sun-light. |


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summer grasses
the wheels of the locomotive
come to a stop |
 -
YAMAGUCHI Seishi (1901 - 1994)
 |
|
On the track lines a locomotive train comes into the train
yard; the speed of its big wheels slow down and finally stop
at the edge of the yard where tall summer grasses are growing.
The engine's white steam rises and drifts away. The green
grass, the white steam and the black locomotive all make a
haiku of contrast.
It seems that the power of the summer grasses stops the big
chunk of iron that represents the convenience of modern life.
This is a haiku of contrast between soft and hard, which is
Nature and civilization. The dynamic movement of the wheels
seems as big as on a movie screen and the effect moves us.
This haiku method is very innovative. |

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wild geese
all that remains
beautiful |
 -
ISHIDA Hakyo (1913 - 1969)
 |
|
This haiku needs an introduction about the poet's parting
on September 23, 1943 when he got his draft card notice. He
then thought of his family and friends who remained behind.
In the evening sky, a flock of wild geese were flying and
honking and then disappeared. It seemed to echo Hakyos sad
feeling and his determination to deem, everything that remains
as beautiful. This shows his affection toward everything that
remained: the value of family and friends - and that love
becomes more beautiful when it ends. His sad feeling is embodied
in the image of the departing wild geese. |
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